Wednesday, January 11, 2012

Assignment #2

Topic One: Analyze a character from your novel whose mind is pulled in conflicting directions by two compelling desires, ambitions, obligations, or influences.

Cormac McCarthy, author of the novel The Road, creates a seemingly ceaseless journey in which a father and a son must choose between the desire to die, and the will to live. The boy has been contemplating death a throughout the journey for survival and he even asks his father “What would you do if I die?” in which the father replied “If you died I would want to die too.” (11). This conversation exposes the boys and the father’s inner thoughts. The sufferings that they have to endure don’t seem to be worth living for.  They’d rather lay down there life then to have to pick it up and carry the burden of this ceaseless suffering they call life.  All the while the boy and father are contemplating death; they are still in route to their fight to survive. This shows that deep down their inner-man is fighting to live. When the father was about to die of sickness he encouraged the boy to keep surviving by doing what he was taught. He worries about who will find him and his father foreshadows saying “Goodness will find the little boy, it always has and it will again.”(281).   After all the contemplating of wondering whether to live or die, the boy finally decides to fulfill a desire to live. He realized that he had come too far on this endless journey to give up.  Life will have its many challenges, but once a person realizes that they overcame all of their suffering, it makes it easier to know that they can continue to live.

12 comments:

  1. K. Dinh
    2nd period

    Score: 7

    Strengths: The paragraph contains analysis and insight and the conclusion sentence ties the whole paragraph together.

    Weaknesses: The evidence was supposed to be paraphrased, not quoted.

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  2. B. Le
    3rd

    Score- 7

    Strengths- Fluid and organized and insightful
    Weakness- text quotes, should be paraphrased

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  3. C. Johnson
    2nd

    Score-7

    Strengths: nice opening sentence, organized, clear thesis, comes together with a sense of completion

    Weakness: repitition

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  4. A. Okpobiri
    1st

    Score= 7

    Strengths: Well thought out ideas, insightful, great ending to tie to real world lesson

    Weakness: Quoted evidence not paraphrased

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  5. Sebastian Prince
    5th pd
    Score-7
    Strengths- very insightful and well explained
    Weakness- the ideas were repeated on diff. occastions

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  6. Score: 7

    Strengths: clear thesis, very organized and a more mature style of writing

    Weakness: not paraphrased.

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  7. T.Dabney-Bryant
    2nd Period
    Score-7
    Strength-Great explanation of thoughts.
    Weakness:Strayed of topic at times

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  8. LK
    2nd Period
    score-7
    strength- Clear and insightful analysis
    weakness-not paraphrased

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  9. B.L.
    1st Period
    score-6
    strength- Clear and insightful analysis
    weakness- the evidences are quoted and not paraphrased

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  10. K.T
    2nd period

    Score- 6
    Strength- Good diction and insightful
    weakness- evidence not paraphrased

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  11. E. Ng
    2nd period

    Score 7
    Strength- The paragraph is well pieced and very strong as a whole, it is also very insightful on The Road.
    Weakness- Feels as if ideas are repeated

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  12. J. segura 2nd period
    7- has good diction as well as insight
    have more evidence and analysis

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